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PostSubject: Rommel's Doll (Finished)   Thu Mar 18, 2010 8:08 am

Name: Aanaarden Saffiaantje

Manifestation: Aanaarden Soffiaatje's manifestation is a human shaped figure that is seemingly sewn together from pieces of fabric. The eyes are sewn black eyes and the mouth is seemingly sewed together but somehow he manages to speak. When he speaks the voice is gravely and deep, giving it an evil feel. When the manifestation walks his body parts sway as if he had no control over them.
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Medium: Aanaarden Saffiaantje’s medium is a golden box of cigarettes. It is not the cigarettes themselves but the box made of various metals. It is three inches tall and one inch wide. The box does not crush the cigarettes inside because there is a layer of fabric lining the inside. On the back of the box is Rommel’s family crest.
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Doll Ablity: The doll’s ability is that it can transform itself into a cloud of sand. When activated Aanaarden Saffiaantje seems to melt into sand at its feet. The sand form maintains the same intellectual state as before the transformation. It is activated by Rommel striking a cigarette from the box while the doll is formed into its medium form. The sand has the same mass of the medium transformation which is one hundred pounds exactly. The sand can take any shape that would be possible with the amount of sand including human shape. It can also move as if it were alive although, in a manor of speaking it is alive.

Element: Earth

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Multipliceren: Once activated this technique doubles the amount of sand that Aanaarden Saffiaantje is turned into. This gives a wider variety of shapes for the doll to transform into. Duration three posts, cooldown five posts.

Afleiden Carrosserie: When Rommel speaks the incant his doll moves towards him as fast as is possible at the moment. Once beside Rommel, Aanaarden Saffiaantje in sand form surrounds the Bountou. The doll gives him enough room so he can breathe but other then that is completely sealed off. The sand at his feet begins to move rapidly and pushes the ground away like a drill. It then speeds up creating a tunnel like shape and it disappears along with Rommel underground. It then reappears no more then twenty feet away from his original position. Once safely on the ground the sand returns back to the ground at Rommel’s feet. This technique cannot be used on any other ground surface but dirt or substances of the same density. Cooldown seven posts.


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PostSubject: Re: Rommel's Doll (Finished)   Thu Mar 18, 2010 4:32 pm

Don't play with them dolls, kiddo. Anywho, APPROVED. Just remember that your ability is best used with sand. No dirt or earth.
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PostSubject: Re: Rommel's Doll (Finished)   Mon May 31, 2010 4:24 pm

Ability #2:

Ability: After the incant Zand Spoelen, Aanaarden Saffiaantje’s arms turn into sand and continue to spit out sand until one hundred liters have come out which is when his hands revert back to normal. Once the sand is entirely out it begins to fly around as if it were blown by a very strong wind. A sandstorm commences at one hundred kilometers an hour however, there is no actual wind. The sand doesn’t move out of a range of fifty feet and it doesn’t affect Rommel. The sand stops right before it hits him as if it hits an invisible barrier and reflects back into the storm. The sand moves fast enough to cause fifty percent blindness and sting skin. If you remain inside the storm for over ten posts it begins to cause permanent damage to the skin and begins to rip if off. The damage gets worse the longer you stay in and it affects all exposed skin. The storm weakens as Rommel weakens. For example if Geest were to pass out the storm will dissipate. Lasts for 12 posts. Cooldown once per battle.

Element: Sand


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PostSubject: Re: Rommel's Doll (Finished)   Sat Jun 05, 2010 8:17 am

Right, big problem first off the bat.

Your sandstorm lasts for how long? Obviously longer than 10 posts. Although I will admit that's a long time to be standing in something that's causing you to be hurt. I presume things such as Danku and other blocking abilities are applied to the sandstorm?

If it is fuelled by Rommel's reiatsu I would also suggest that the sandstorm's power decreases as his strength decreases. The amount of time it takes to strip flesh from bone should decrease the more he uses it.

I'd also like a huge cooldown for this technique. If he can only use it once that's good enough for me. Also, what's the implication time for this technique? how long does it take from the order to the sandstorm?

Aside from this, I find nothing wrong with it.
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PostSubject: Re: Rommel's Doll (Finished)   Sat Jun 05, 2010 9:00 am

Yeah I'm happy with it now.

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