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PostSubject: Val (Redone)   Fri Apr 02, 2010 10:34 am

Name: Valentina Volpe

Rank: Fraccion to Hiruma

Age: 1,257

Appearance: Valentina is a rather voloptuous young female arrancar. She has long silver hair that goes down to her buttocks. Her eyes are bright yellow with slit pupils, much like a cat's. Her hands and feet are almost animalistic in appearance. her hands are human in shape, but are covered in a thin black pelt. On her palm and on the underside of each fingertip is a hardened pad, much like a dog's. Each finger is tipped in inch long, razor sharp claws. She has two large canine teeth in place of normal incisors. Atop her head are a pair of vulpine ears. They are white in color. Her feet are a little different. She only has three toes on each foot. They maintained a fox-like appearance. She also has a long, plush tail. The fur is snow white and extremely soft to the touch. She is usually dressed in a typical Arrancar's attire. However, her outfit is rather different. Her top is long sleved, and low cut, showing a bit of her cleavage. She wears nothing beneath her thin Hakama pants. This made things more comfortable for her tail. Her mask fragments appear as set of jaw bones, both Maxillary and Mandibular bones, on both sides of her face, and her hollow hole is located between her collarbones.



Gender: Female

Personality:Valentina is energetic and cunning. She loves playing tricks on her fellow arrancar, as well as flirting with the males. She is a bit sneaky at times. She's very playful and never really takes anything seriously. She is a vicious fighter. She fights like an animal when provoked, reverting to a more primal nature. She's often rather cocky and will pick a fight with anything that she knows she stands a chance at defeating. Her cocky attitude doesn't replace her common sense. She apsolutely adores messing with the opposite sex. Due to her looks, she gets quite a bit of male attention. She soaks it up like a sponge. Her biggest pet peeve is her tail. If anybody lays a single finger on it, they are doomed to certian death. Though she comes off as arrogant and cocky, she has a strong sense of duty and will do anything for her brothers and sisters in Hueco Mundo, even if it means her life. She is not one to give up easily. Val hates humans with an undying passion. She won't hesitate to crush one, given the chance. She sees them as filthy insects.


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Hair Color: white

Likes: Chaos and destruction

Dislikes: Silence and boring situations

Crushes: human skulls? o-o

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Specialties: She has a canine's keen sense of smell and hearing.

History:
Life on Earth::

Valentina was born in Flourence, Italy. Her father died before she was born, so she was raised by her mother alone. She attended school like a normal child, and was quite popular among her peers due to her open personality. When she was fifteen, she fell in love with her boyfriend at the time. This boy was ninteen years old. Valentina's mother did not approve and warned Valentina of the serious risks that can come from her actions. Valentina, being a normal teenager, ignored them. One night, the young man took Valentina to an old warehouse where he and some of his buddies were having a party. She had a good time, drank, and danced. A seemingly harmless night. At least until the guys started drinking a little too much. The guy she was dating made some rather obvious invitations and crude gestures. Valentina became quite uneasy and refused. maybe it was the liquor that made the guy so violent, or it could have been embarassment from rejection in front of his buddies. he shoved Valentina to the floor and climbed on top of her, holding a knife to her throat as he and his friends took turns raping and beating her. Valentina was a frail girl. She died hours later after the guys finished with her. Her soul was full of rage. She stayed bound to that warehouse years after her death, feeding her hatred for the males that destroyed her. Soon the rage became too much and she was consumed by it. He chain broke and a large hole formed in her chest. Next thing she knew, she found herself in Hell. Hueco Mundo.

Life in Hueco
When Valentina arrived, she had already mutated into the form of a large white fox. Valentina spent her entire life on her own. She never really bothered to associate herself with other hollows. She craved only one thing. Power. She desired to become an arrancar more than anything. This drove her down a path of death and destruction. She spent the majority of her existance hunting and devouring numerous hollows in order to progress to an adjuchas level hollow. Her adjuchas form took on the shape of a large fox. She spent her time traveling the desert, trying to become a Vasto Lorde, killing any hollow that came her way. That's when she met Hao Aokami. Hao was a member of the espada at the time. He was a quiet individual and seemed quite lonely. That's what attracted her to the man. He was just like her.They became quick friends and he trained with her, helping her advance to an arrancar. He spared with her and hunted with her, helping her devour hollow after hollow until she built up the strength to rip off her own mask. After three years of serving at Hao's side as his fraccion, he trained her and helped her advance to Tercera Espada. He then disapeared from her life forever. This upset Valentina greatly, bringing her to the point where she even quit the Espada and fled to the desert of Hueco Mundo. She didn't bother dwelling on the past, though she still misses Hao greatly. She now likes to wander around the desert and play tricks on her fellow hollow, causing mischief yet not enough to get her into serious trouble, though deep down, she secretly desires to become a Fraccion to an Espada. She wants the feeling of being important to someone, like she was to Hao. After Hao left, Valentina wandered Hueco Mundo aimlessly, forever searching for a master. She then found Hiruma. Rather..Hiruma found her and tried to kill her until she pledged her loyalty to the male. Now she remains his loyal pet, willing to carry out any reasonable order given by him. Mundo::



Innate Ability:
Shapeshifting. At any moment, Valentina can take on the shape of a three tailed Yoko, though will appear as a normal silver fox to human eyes. She can only take the fox form. Mothing more. Her power can becompared to that of a werewolf, but she changes at her own free will.

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PostSubject: Re: Val (Redone)   Thu Apr 08, 2010 5:08 am

All right, well, I have a couple questions, and concerns, regarding this application. First off, just so we are clear, you can only shapeshift into a three-tailed fox, nothing else. This doesn't give you anything other than the transformation, either. If your intention was something else, please state so, as I will require you to be more detailed on this if you are able to shapeshift into other things, as well. Shapeshifting is quite a versatile power, after all. However, if you can only turn into a fox, then ignore what I have said.

Second, I have a problem with your histroy. You are an Adjuchas, correct? Not one of the top four Espada, and thus, not a Vasto Lorde. That being the case, I find this part of your histroy to be inconsistent and troubling.

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She spent the majority of her existance hunting and devouring numerous hollows in order to progress to an adjuchas level Hollow. Her adjuchas form took on the shape of a large fox. She spent her time traveling the desert, trying to become a Vasto Lorde, killing any hollow, adjuchas, or vasto lorde that came her way.

No matter how I look at it, an Adjuchas killing Vasto Lorde-level hollow doesn't seem possible. Not to mention the fact that Vasto are a rather rare form of Menos. After you answer my questions, reassure my concerns, and fix that part of your history, then I will call this approved. I find no other problems than that, other than a few grammatical errors, which you should fix. Beginning letters of sentences that are not capitalized, nothing much to worry about.
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PostSubject: Re: Val (Redone)   Thu Apr 08, 2010 6:39 pm

With these edits, I see nothing wrong with this application. Therefore, unless a higher, or lower, power has some problem with this. I now deem this character to be approved.
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