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PostSubject: The Human Drug WIP   Wed Apr 14, 2010 7:56 pm

SuperHuman Registration

Name: John Corriveau

Rank: TAO

Age: 21

Appearance: He stands at 5"11' with redish-brown hair that goes close down to his shoulders. He has blue eyes behind the hair that hangs from his forehead. He has an average build. He usually wears short sleave shirts with somewhat baggy light blue jeans. He always has his little earphones on with something playing. Even though he can't hear, he can read lips perfectly. Though that is how he dresses on occasion, XTC will dress in other odd clothing as well. Be it a 2 peice suit with a raven's head or dying his hair black with a section of white an running a scar down his face.

Gender: Male



Hair Color: Auburn/Red (For Now.)





Specialties: Anything that XTC learns ad he does, it only takes a few more times before it is mastered and he has perfected. XTC also possess Pre-cog. This isn't something that one is born with, it is what is achived after many years of fighting and training one's body. Pre-cog is the ability to tell what the opponent is going do next with just the tiniest of tell signs, be it a batting of an eye, a drop of sweat, a twitching of a muscle. XTC has an eidetic memory, which means; Anything that he remembers, perfectly, anything that he has read, heard, or seen.


Picture of Character: None.

Sample Chapter: Standing in a large field is the captain of the 7th Division, Zaihandate Maybus. The wind blows, his long blonde hair flows with it. Zai unsheathes his Zanpaku-to and waves it before him. A new being now stands before Zai. A being that appears to be the opposite of Zai. Where Zai had blonde hair, the being had black. Zai gave off a warm glow but the other gave forth to a dark pressence. This new being was Deshwitat, the spirit of Deus Vitae. Deshwitat dresses in a 17th Centery mercenary outfit. " Time already, Zai? " Desh smirked out. " Indeed it is, Deshwitat. " Zai replied. Desh waved his hand and the area around them changed. What was once a large field, now resembles a very holy land. " This is your world. " Deshwitat said. Zai couldn't believe it. There were crystals floating in the air, along with massive chunks of land that resemble small islands. In the center of the area stands a large mansion, surrounded by trees with a large pathway, overlapped by pilars. Deshwitat turned over to Zai. " Before you get your Bankai, you need to train in three key areas first. First we will work on your physical strength. " Zai smirked and took his stance, with his Zanpaku-to in hand. Desh gave out a soft chuckle and extended out his right hand. Zai's zanpaku-to then flew out of his grip and into Desh's right hand. " Uh uh uh. " Desh grinned out. " You won't have a need for an in hand weapon in your Bankai state. " Desh snapped his fingers and 13 men dressed in servants clothing came out of the mansion and made a circle around Zai. " These men will be your first step of the training. The objective is simple, beat them down and don't die. " As soon as Desh had finished speaking the servants had all taken a stance, surrounding Zai, and were ready to take down Zai. " Oh and one more thing.... " Desh trailed off a bit. " Have fun.... " Desh was indeed going to enjoy this session.

Zai took his fighting stance and carfully watched the men surrounding him. Zai made slow circles around to get sight of everyone that surrounded him. On the left of Zai one of the men jumped in towards him. Zai quickly turned over and moved under the oncoming male and stuck out two fingers in his right hand. Zai then shot his two fingers below the man's rib cage, aiming for his liver. Any second now the man should start to vomit. But nothing happens. Zai can hear Desh laughing off in the distance. " Ha ha.... You really think that it would've been that easy? These men have no internal organs and their bones are as hard as steel. The only way to win is to simply overpower them. " Desh continues to laugh. Zai knew this was going to be a lot harder than he thought before. He knew he could take down one and on a good day, two. But 13 seemed almost impossible. Zai quickly jumped on top of a pillar, away from the group of men. The servants were quick to follow, as they all surrouned the pillar first and then jumped after Zai. As one cam in closer, Zai struck the man in the head with his right foot. Bad move. Zai thought as his attack showed no effect and now his foot hurt. " Come on Zai. What kind of master are you? You can't even take down these small parts of your mind? I'll give you a hint..... Each one you are facing represents a limit of your body, speed, and reiatsu. And you have 13 all together. 13 limits, 13 opponents. Now that you know this much, this should go a lot smoother. " Zai now had to figure out which limit is the first. Zai watched each man that would come towards him. As Zai would evade each attack, he would keep track of how many times they attacked before. And Zai found out who to attack first, Zai noticed as one always stayed in the back and rarely attacked. He was obviously the weakest one and therefore the first limit Zai had to breakdown. Zai then shunpo'd behind the others and appeared to the side oc the weakest of them all. The man swung a fist towards Zai, but Zai blocked the oncoming fist and wrapped his arm around the man's. Once Zai's arm was securly wrapped around the other man's arm; Zai moved behind him and locked his arm in place. The others quickly came to the aid and tried to strike Zai from all sides, but Zai had already predicted what they would do and placed the limit before thier attacks at the last second. The force of the others striking the man had weakend the skeletal structureand Zai used that moment to come in and deliver the final blow to the limit. The man gave out a yell as he grew a bright white an faded away. Zai could now feel his strength increasing as he a had broken down the first limit. " 1 down. 12 to go. " Zai sighed out. Desh continud to watch in the distance as he gave off a smirk. With his newly obtained strength, Zai went in after the other 12 men in search of the next limit he needed to over come. Zai appeared in the center of the men and quickly gve them all a quick strike to the stomach area. It was there that Zai could feel the weakest one with his attack. Zai then centerd in on the one standing on his 5 o'clock. When Zai struck him, he gave more of a reaction to the blow; meaning that Zai is close to breaking down his next limit. Zai gave the man a quick blow to the gut area with his knee and as the man keeled over, Zai brought down a quick fist to the neck. The man gave out a yell and then grew bright and faded away, like the limit before. Zai now felt stronger than ever as he felt a new strength surge through his body. Zai now felt like he could take down any of these limits with a single blow. And he could. 2 limits gone and 11 to go. Zai gave out a hearty laugh as he resumed strikingthe men around him constantly and breaking down two more limits in the process. Zai let out a roar as he felt a stronger surge of energy course through his body. Zai was about to strike again but Desh stepped in the way. " That's enough for your strength. Now it is time for your speed. But first we take a moment for you to get adjusted with your new strength. "

Zai fell back and landed on the green gass beneath him. He let out a sigh of relif. An hour passed and Zai was up to 100% and ready to start the next phase of his training. Desh appeared before Zai adn the nine remaining limits behind him. " Now the second part of your training. You've broken down your limits for strength. Now it is your speed that you need to work on. " In that isntant the limits disappeard from sight and Zai bent over in pain. All nine limits just struck Zai in the stomach at the same time. " The goal is simple. Beat them like you did before, but this time you need to keep up. " Desh smirked out. " Well I'll leave you be. " Desh then vanished from sight and reappeared a distance away, onlooking the fight about to begin. Zai got up and looked around for the limits he needed to take down. They were nowhere in sight. Zai let out a grunt as he felt another blow to his gut. The limits were moving to fast for Zai to see. Zai had to figure out a way to hit them, but without seeing them it would prove to be highly difficult. Zai would need to be able to figure our where they would strike next and the proper counter for it. But Zai was a genius, so it wouldn't take long for him to do. Zai closed his eyes and listend to the wind as it blew by him. Zai would then start to feel short gusts of wind that flew by his being. There were three of them. Where were the other six? Was the thought that ran through Zai's mind as he felt a swift kick to his back. Zai couldn't feel the gust of wind that would come after that attack. It seems that the other six were moving at a much faster speed. Zai would focus on the one with the weaker gust of wind, as it would be the slowest of them all. Zai kept track of their movement patterns as it didn't change much from the previous fight. They seemed to attack and then regroup afterwards. Simple to follow and easy for Zai to keep track of.

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