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PostSubject: Misutāsumairu   Sun May 09, 2010 9:22 pm

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Name: Misutāsumairu

Ex- Division: 11

Appearance:
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Normal Clothing: He usually wears navy jeans with a yellow shirt with a smiley on it along with a black leather jacket and checkered shoes. He also wears a red scarf and his glasses. He doesn't actually need them, he just wears them for effect and decoration. He does not actually have a gun or the outfit in picture. This character is just based off that person from the anime. He has blonde hair, blue eyes, has a good build, and is about 6'3". He has a piercing on his left ear and he wears a silver shiny earring.

Age: 701

Appearance Age: 19

Gender: Male

Personality:

Kyōfu has a well-rounded personality. At times that call for seriousness and times that call for cheerful optimism, he knows what to be. Although he has this well-rounded personality, his original personality he grew up with is that of a cheerful and relaxed attitude. Basically, he would rather rest, relax, and have fun than do battle. BUT, don't tempt him. He actually has a very... bad side. If you manage to get him pissed, he will explode and all of his power will come rushing down onto you. Which... wouldn't be good.

He also has a very contradicting personality. Due to his severe spastic side, he tends to act like an idiot when not needed. Though, as said before, if wanted/needed he can transform himself into the serious leader that everyone wants to have. Due to his experience and easy-going personality, most like to be around him. Not to mention most people can respect him for not being that hard stone of a leader that does nothing but yell.

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Hair Color: Blonde

Likes: Saki, Women, fighting, having fun, optimism, etc

Dislikes: Cocky, Ignorant, annoying, underestimating, and cruel people.

Crushes: (Uh, we'll find out through role-play.]

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Specialties: Cooking, Medicine, Good Memory and Ambidexterity. Hand to Hand combat, Kendo, and a combination between the two. Board Games and drinking sake.

History:

Birth:

Misutāsumairu's original name wasn't actually Misutāsumairu. His original name was actually Kyōfu o Makikomu. One day, the day of his birth, he was born into the world with light casting down upon him from a window and the sweat of the doctors who were ever so trying to bring him into the world without fail. Barely hearing the heavy breathing of his mother, he tilted his head and squirmed in the doctors hands. He hadn't a single need to find out who was his mother. He could just tell. As he was pulled away to be cleaned. He stopped moving and became a motionless baby in the hands of the doctors. As a clean rag was swept over the surface of his skin, the blood covering him was took away and he felt as if something had left him. Which was entirely true seeing that he was in the outside world with no enclosure and safety that of his mother. Feeling a small towel being wrapped around him, he was handed to his mother. Starting to cry, his mother cradled him as he fell asleep.

12 years later:

He was now 12 years old and his parents gave him a very large birthday party. He took his whole class and they went to an amusement park. Though, throughout all the rides, he forced everyone that came for his party behind him. He would cut through and laugh at them for not getting to do so. He felt that he had the right since it was his birthday. That made everyone very angry. They were filled with hatred for him and they only came since they would be invited to the amusement park. In frustration, all of his party members left the party... and all of them had the full agreement of their parents. Kyōfu o Makikomu... was alone.

That same day, when he was dashing through all the activities the amusement park had to offer, he found himself lost. Confused, and then angry, he screamed out, "MOM", extremely loud right in the middle of a crowd. Crying, he wiped his eyes and started to run into some direction cutting off several people. Pushing through, he screamed and screamed and screamed. Finding a huge group of people crowding around something, he squeezed his way through and gasped in surprise. There, on the ground, was his mother and father dead. Looking up, he saw a police man restraining a clown. Looking down again, he saw a gun near the clown's feet. Slowly stepping forward, he slid under a policeman's running feet and slumped downward staring at the dead bodies of his parents. As a single tear started to trickle down his cheek, this was the first time he had actually experienced true pain. Banging his hands against the ground, he balled them into fists and punched the dirt while crying like a little baby. Not only had he left them with the image of a selfish little kid, he had left them without even getting to see their smiling faces before they died. Staring up into the clouds, he grew limp and unconscious as he fainted from pure hatred and fear for the world. Before his reality grew black, he asked but one question..., "Why?"

The Death:

As a now mature adult, Kyōfu o Makikomu had become everything his parents wanted him to be. He had gotten into a first rate college, he had a black belt in karate, and he was no longer selfish. Since his loss, he grew more... kind from knowing that the memories he made with people were important to each person. Becoming friends with the people who previously hated him, he was one of the more popular people among his age group. One day, during a science class, they were testing chemicals. Mixing them and writing out what they looked like and drawing a picture, it was normal day-to-day work for Kyōfu. Staring down at the chemicals before him, there were three test tubes. One with a greenish liquid that was exploding bubbles. One with a yellowish liquid that looked very dense. Then, lastly, the third that was a reddish liquid and looked as if it were blood. Mixing the green liquid with the yellow liquid by accident, the two chemicals mixed together and created a chemical reaction. An explosion. Having not payed attention since he was thinking of different things, the chemicals exploded on his face and he felt a burning sensation. Yet, it wasn't just a sensation... he was burning!

Running frantically around the classroom, he could hear his other peers shrieking from surprise. As they all bellowed out screams with their adrenaline pumping, Kyōfu flailed his arms as he dashed across the room and right through a window. Having been on the fourth floor, he fell to his death. Kyōfu o Makikomu would soon join his parents.

The Rebirth:

Waking up in Soul Society, he was filled with confusion to where he was. Then, with a slight burst of realization, he remembered a man wearing black and holding a katana shoving the end of his hilt onto his forehead speaking the following words, "You'll be going to a safe place now, my friend. It's Soul Society, and you'll like it much more than here." Rubbing his eyes, he stood up and wandered off filled with many, many questions. Over the years, he found himself growing in spiritual power. Kyofu managed to create a ball of reiatsu from his palm and hit large objects creating a large hole. He also trained his body and began to understand the mechanics of hand-to-hand combat. This soul wasn't going to be as weak as he was. He was going to become stronger and help save people like the person had saved him.

Shinigami:

Having discovered his own power, he soon became a shinigami. His goal was purely this, he would strive to help better the world for everyone else. Unlike his young selfish personality, his new goals were not based on himself but on others instead. With his katana in his hand and the shinigami uniform he wore, he would soon rise up in the ranks and put his name in the history of the seireitei and soul society itself. This was his goal. He would accomplish it... no matter what!

The day he would forever remember:

One day, as Kyōfu practiced his kendo in an area within the seireitei, he slashed and cut the air around him with his katana as if he were fighting a real opponent. Smiling as he did so, he knew that he would have to train to get better. If he didn't, then he would stay in the low ranks and would probably be one of the shinigami to die a slow and painful death from being feasted upon by a passing by hollow. Suddenly sensing a presence other than his own, he spun around and held up his katana in a position that would easily give him the ability to defend or preferably... attack. Feeling the presence move to behind him, he sidestepped to the ride as he pivoted his feet around. Now facing to where he felt the presence, he gasped in surprise by the image his eyes gave him. Seeing a shinigami, he felt as if nothing was wrong. It was just a shinigami passing by, right? Nope. Not even close. Staring at the shinigami, he noticed that his face was enshrouded in the shadow from a building which meant he couldn't make out his identity. Sliding his right foot backward, he squinted his eyes in an effort to make out more details of the person.

Suddenly feeling a sharp pain develop around his head, he fell to his knees dropping his sword to the ground beside him. Grasping the hilt of his katana with his right hand, he reached up to his forehead with his left hand as he stared at the other shinigami. "Wha-what are you doing!!!" Being given no response, he removed his left hand from his face and struggled to stand up. Ignoring the increasing pain throughout his body, Kyofu raised his katana and charged at the foe shinigami. Then, as he slashed downwards in an effort to kill him, the shinigami flash stepped away and into the shadows behind Kyofu. Having not hit anything, his katana continued to strike downwards and he lost hold of the ground. Stumbling downwards, he once again dropped his sword as he fell. Lifting his head up again, he stared at the shinigami as more pain came knocking on his door. Feeling a slight tingle on his face, he lifted his hand and felt something. Looking at his image through the reflection of his sword, a hollow max was forming on his face. Trying to scream, the transformation was only getting faster.

Heh Heh... you have done well but since you got here, you fell into my trap... my little test subject.

Trying to speak, he couldn't find the words and lost consciousness.

The Awakening:

Later, as he awoke, he found himself in a room that wasn't where had had been earlier. Finding himself in a bed, he pushed the covers away from him and stood up. Stretching, he noticed there was something on the ground. Shocked, he stepped back from seeing the item on the ground just below him. Picking it up, it was a mask. Hearing footsteps, he turned around as the door to the room he was in bolted open.

"Good, you're awake. It's time."

Then, kyofu responded, "Time for what?"

"You'll soon find out."

The New Name:

The next day, after he had heard the news of what he had become, he was shocked and filled with anguish. Why... why had this happened to him? He was just training and the next thing he knew his whole life had been warped without a second thought. No... this was a beginning. A beginning for something new. Something that he would have to work with and something he would use to grow stronger. He would use this newfound power to become better than he had ever become. Then, along with it, he would change his name. He would now be, "Misutāsumairu" which means, "Mister Smiles" in English. There was no real reason to it. Maybe this name was used to create intimidation or tension among the others. Maybe this name was just there like everything else was just there. Who knows? Well, Misutāsumairu would make sure that his name would be remember. He was the Smiling Man, he was Mister Smiles. He was a vizard... and he would never forget that.

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Sample Chapter:

Justice. Power. Strength. Courage. Obedience. Speed. Logic. Might. Brain. Soul. The ten things that Shinzui believed to be the way things in all worlds worked with. Without justice you cannot be able to tell what is wrong and what is right. Without justice you cannot realize the true power of a good person's heart. Without power you cannot use that justice to its true potential and show the world what you are capable of. Without courage you cannot step up to those who are evil and vanquish them from the world and send them into the chaos of the prison that traps them in for all eternity. Without Obedience you cannot realize what you are doing when its the time for you to make a choice. Without speed you cannot escape what ties you down to the evil ways that a villain may try and enslave you with. Without Logic you cannot figure out the easy and simple solution to the equation of life. Without Might you cannot show everyone how and why you are worthy to stand up to those who threaten the good of the world. Without Brain you cannot have logic and then you cannot even have a chance to save even yourself. ... Without soul... you cannot even be alive. Without soul you cannot even show the world and universe what you truely hold dear to you. You cannot show the world what you know and you cannot show anyone in the world what they need to know. Without soul you cannot choose the right path and keep yourself up when things are down. That... is what Shinzui believes in.

Watching as the primera released his powers, Shinzui was quite curious to find out the arrancar's true potential. Although right now he was more curious to finding out how he was going to get out of this mess. As the cero started to charge, he knew that he would have to think of somethign quick to what he would do to either block it or attack the attack with another attack. (ooc: LOL >.>) As the throne of ice came up out of the ground, he knew that it wasn't going to be the primera who was going to fight him at the moment. Although he knew that whatever he sent out... there would be a way to overcome it. Logic! Quickly thinking to himself, he knew that there was always an easy solution with the world. He knew that there was a way to overcome this arrancar's power. As each of the knights introduced themselves, they each took someone to fight. Although some decided to fight the the others. Bad choice. If the primera wished to beat Shinzui in this fight he would have to go full power on him. Although he knew he would never be able to win if he didn't go full power now.

As two of the knights came up torward him, it was already almost impossible for them to get close to him. Reiatsu was pouring out of him in a crazy manner. It was coming out of him at every angle possible and the ground started to rise up into the air. With the reiatsu pressure raining down on them, he hoped that his 1st division member could handle what was soon going to come. He knew that if she didn't get out of there, she would be killed by the power that he and his opponent would release. Arrancar. I will not let you go on living in this world if you are going to kill more and more innocent people. I will not let you kill anyone after this fight. You know why? ... because your going to be dead. Glaring at the arrancar, he unsheathed his second zanpakuto and got into a position where anyone could tell he was going to unleash his power soon. Shouting out again, he was going to make sure the primera knew what he was getting into. I cannot bare to let someone like you live on. No matter what power you may hold, that is not enought to stop me. I shall destroy you and make you pay for every life you have taken. I will kill you even if it takes me to the firey depths of hell. I will kill you even if it costs my life! You will not breathe another breath! ARRANCAR!!! ... Justice! Clearing his throat, his eyes were glowing a royal purple as he spoke the wonderous and amazing words that any shinigami would want to have for themselves.

BANKAI!!!

Power! BAM! A flash of light showered over the area from the transformation. BOOM! A cloud of smoke swept over the area as the reiatsu stoped flaring. As the pressure started to lower, a figure could be seen emerging from the smoke. Wearing a black cloak that resembled the one that his zanpakuto's spirit wore, he held a double bladed scythe. If this sycthe was spun, then both blades would be spinning the same way. Holding the staff that held the two black blades together, a liquid could be seen if you got closer up. This was Shinzui's poison. His poison's effects were something that was hard to figure out until they started. With his eyes still glowing that intimidating royal purple, he suddenly dissapeared in what was more than a flash. Shinzui's bankai granted him a step that no normal flash step could repeat. His bankai allowed him to move at speeds double the shinigami flash step. Something that shunpo users could only dream of. Looking at the larger man that was in Angelo's place, he knew that he would have to take him out to get rid of all the others. Appearing infront of the large man, he was exactly 10 meters away from him. Taking his other hand, he moving his right hand just above the center of the staff and put his other hand just below the center of the staff. Suddenly it seemed that it was broke in half. WRONG! A chain appeared and it seemed it wasn't one double bladed scythe but two that were connected together.

As purple reiatsu started to flare around the blades, he brought them up and slashed in an x motion torwards the massive man. Two very large sized wave of poison erupted from the blades and flew through the air torwards his massive opponent. Although this poison was very special. It's effects started when it first touches the skin. Meaning if he was able to cut his opponent of if his opponent was hit by the poison, an extremely hurtful irritation would start to erupt in the skin. This would cause a very large distraction to the irritated opponent. Truthfully, the opponent would be irritated both ways. One, by the poison, and two, by the angering power that was Shinzui's. After a small while, the poison would sink and start to paralyze his opponents. Meaning no matter what happened, his opponents would sooner or later would lose their ability to move themselves. The effects were impossible to stop unless Shinzui's opponent had some form of healing ability. What was more amazing was that soon after, the paralysis would start to spread along the body. This poison was more of a slow kill. The longer the opponent tryed to last, the more the poison would paralyze. Although in this case, he had several people to hit with his poison. Even though Shinzui wanted to "review" his poison's effects to himself, he knew that he had to keep focus on what was happening. If either of the knights tryed to come at him, he would quickly dodge and send a poison wave torwards them. If the massive man came at him, he would do the same. Although if he found an opening, he would take it. He would kill the primera anyway possible.


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PostSubject: Re: Misutāsumairu   Fri May 14, 2010 1:41 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Misutāsumairu   Fri May 14, 2010 2:12 pm

Your appearance is not long enough. You need to elaborate on it. For instance, I see a gun in both your avy and picture so it must have a holster or what color is your hair and what do you weigh and how tall are you? Or does he wear gloves and does he have any jewry and many other things. If you need any help further describing your character look over other approved applications and they could give you ideas. You also should add a few more sentences on to your personality.

Your entire history seems rushed. Like you had a maximum word count and tried to cram everything in. It's not bad just if you could elaborated more on "The Death" and past it. Also, you seem to always be using the word he. Try using your character's name or his rank or his race or his nationality instead. It makes for an easier read. I'm confused about how he became a vizard. Even if he doesn't remember you should tell us more then he was knocked out then woke up and he was a vizard. Perhaps, you could look at other vizard application sheets and see what they wrote for an example. Once you have completed what I have stated above I will hopefully be able to approve you.
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PostSubject: Re: Misutāsumairu   Sat May 15, 2010 9:23 am

I did what you said and elaborated on what I wrote. Although, I did not change the "hes" and stuff. From now on, I will adjust how I write to a more suitable way that you would rather like. One that includes me saying less "hes". I wrote a little more on how I became a vaizard, and I hope I enlightened you in a way that will give me an approval. If not, I will continue editing to your liking.
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PostSubject: Re: Misutāsumairu   Sat May 15, 2010 11:52 am

APPROVED as a normal Vizard.
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