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PostSubject: Saruzaka, Takeshi   Sun May 16, 2010 6:44 am

Shinigami Registration


Name:


Saruzaka, Takeshi

Rank:

I can't find the lists of shinigami ranks .. i hope i could be a lieutenant ..

Age:

130

Appearance:

Takeshi's personality is further emphasized by his generally full of life expression, aloof manner, relaxed voice, and minimalist attitude. In serious situations, however, he is shown to have a very stern and intense look. He is almost always seen in his Soul Society shinigami uniform, along with his katana on the left part of his waist. He has a black hair and onyx eyes. He has lighter skin than others had. A recurring theme in Kenzurai’s appearance is that he is considered quite handsome by almost all girls near his age.


Gender:

Male

Personality:

Easy Going Guy -- He is friendly to everyone and is warm hearted and compassionate to them, despite which side they're on. It's rare to find an occasion as to him or smiling or finding a reason to be happy. He is the kind of person that makes everyone his friend, and if friendship isn't achievable, he holds some sort of respect for them. This was because he started to change for himself, he doesn't want to be like when he was a Human, a strict and silent. Takeshi has a rather solitary and matter-of-fact attitude. His calm and detached demeanor has been called “cool, hip, and trendy” many times by other people. Despite his increasingly growing reputation and prowess as a Shinigami, Takeshi has shown no signs of arrogance, and is rather modest about his abilities. His calm attitude is used to his advantage in battle, as it becomes easier for him to maintain his composure to stay focused on the situation at hand, and ultimately notice everything around him. As a result, he can quickly adjust to any situation to make keen and thought-out decisions, allowing him to stay steps ahead of his opponents. . Also, for his entire life, despite being popular towards females due to being handsome and cool, Takeshi showed absolutely no interest in any of these women


Division: 11th


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Hair Color: Black

Likes:

- peace
- friendship
- tea
- smiling
- resting
- sushi
- pretending

Dislikes:

- evil
- war
- seeing other people's pain

Crushes:[
none


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Specialties:

- Hyper Speed -- Takeshi's has an impressive speed saw a huge leap, allowing him to move huge distances in the blink of an eye as if teleportation.
- Observer -- During fights, he easily observes his opponent and accurately sees through their abilities without losing his calm state, then he correctly chooses the most effective means to counter them.

History:

Takeshi Saruzaka was an adopted child of the Katsuyu Clan, a very popular family which handles the most richest companies of the country. He was adopted by Katsuyu Gintama, his father's closest friend that seems like a brother. Their family was in an accident and Takeshi was the only survivor but a trauma with him. Gintama promised in the front of his father's tomb that Takeshi Takeshi Takeshi will be raised properly that he would surpass all his father's success, and grow as the richest and best businessman on the planet. He was still 5 years old when he was adopted, so there's no enough problem for Gintama as he knows doesn't understand the situation well but he was wrong. 's trauma on the death memory of his parents was unforgettable, the explosions and the bloody persons infront of him, it was like a tatoo.

Takeshi turned 15, became more mature as the time passed, became taller, muscular, and good in sports as expected from his foster father. He is also a genius when it comes to math and advanced chemistry, a maniac on solving hard problems without a scratch paper. His grades was the best among the students of the best school but his attitude was the main problem. Even having a brain, Takeshi wasn't a good student. Being a genius, a lot of teachers especially the unexperienced, Takeshi walked out because of arguing on Takeshi until they realized they were the one who is wrong. also entered different clubs in the school, his performance was impressive especially on musical instruments but he end up quitting like insulting their part. He was also far from other students, not having a friend, not because of his attitude but because he don't like being in the noisy crowd, also he stated he can't trust someone. He was also a heart-throb that most of the ladies near his age were getting a crush on him, sometimes, dying hard on him. He was punished by his foster father because of becoming so perfect yet so bad by sending him out of the mansion for a week, no allowance, no credit card.

Walking on the streets, Takeshi brought a little of his money from his daily allowance that was enough for him to eat once a day. On the 3rd to 5th day of the week, Takeshi found fights and troubles on different groups of gansters. Because he was able to master sports like taekwondo, he got a high endurance. Until the groups of gangsters united, they planned on setting an ambush when they find Takeshi . It was a rainy day, Takeshi was walking very weak hungry. He doesn't know where to go, his eyes were blurring until he found a group of people infront of him., they were the gangsters. They messes up with Takeshi , killing him softly, until Takeshi finished some of them, a guy shot him with a gun on head. Takeshi died in the middle of the rain with opened bleeding eyes. "Mother .. Father .. I'm coming .." his last words.

Takeshi waked up and expecting that it was the heaven where he could find his parents. "Stand Up" he heard someone saying it to him. He stand up and saw a girl with a katana on her waist and said "Welcome .. cutie .. welcome to the world of Soul Society" said with a smile. Instead of getting surprised, he smiled and followed the lady. After knowing the whole truth, Takeshi became a Shinigami of the Soul Society. He trained himself more
than he could on the human world, his goal was to be a captain of one of the divisions and become very very strong. When he graduated at the Academy, Ken was immediately recruited by the 11th Division and became a member.

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Sample Chapter:


In the room which Raiken slept in everything was silent and no light from the outside could pierce it's way through the dark, doubled layered material that was his curtains. Raiken sat up in bed as he slowly rubbed the sleep out of his eyes. As he opened them, he could barely see in his room and sat upright in his bed beginning to think, ponder about what venture he would go on today. Ideas and thoughts shuffled through his mind about possible things and adventures that he could go on but these days he didn't really have much to do. The academy was going to officially open in a couple of weeks and in the time before that Raiken was free to do whatever he felt like in the long and arguous days that life brought him. He wasn't complaining, this would give him a chance to really explore hidden areas of the village which he wasn't allowed to before, or practice his ninja skills before the big day would arrive. All Raiken knew was that he had to find something to do today or he would be stuck at home with his mother again bored out his tree.

Raiken slowly got up out of bed like any young boy would do in the direction of the window. He was going by the bearings that his memory had of his room as he couldn't see his hand in front of him it was so dark. He slowly pulled the curtains back and a rush of sunlight pierced it's way through the window in front of him. Raikenquickly shut his eyes, and after a few minutes opened them again slowly, giving them time to adjust to the new light in the room. He looked up into the sky to see a bright blue blanket spread across it, without a cloud in site. Raiken always knew what the day was going to be like by looking at the sky. It was part of his clan heritage which he valued and respected very much. He was always intreged with the sky above him and could look at it hours on end without moving. But he wasn't going to do that today, no he was going to first have a shower and then travel into the inner city of Kumogakure to scope out something interesting to to.

After having a shower at home and eating the breakfast his mother laid out of him on the table he packed up a few things and told her he was going out for the day. Like always she said "Be careful Raiken, you never know what kind of nasty person is out there," and like always he shrugged it off. Raiken stepped out onto the walm stone path just outside his house searching which way to go, he had to find the fasted route to town as he was going on foot. On his travels he began to think of something to do for he was bored out of his mind. He scanned what was the inner city of Kumogakure a head of him, as his home was not far away from town only a couple minutes walk. He scanned over all the old buildings and shops looking for a place for his adventure to start. He passed many places all for which he ahd been before. Finally he stopped and glanced at a large building in front of him. It was very old looking like every other building in the cvillage, but enscribed on the side of the large stair case leading up to a large wooden door was the word [Library].

Raiken stopped and looked up at the building which towered over him like he was an ant. It had surprised him but he had never been here before. Such a large building and his mother never took him there. Raiken was fascinated by the large building and he slowly walked up the steps to venture inside. It was easy to say that Raiken wasn't obsessed or intreged by books and scrolls that much, but that wasn't the main reason he was here. Sure, he would give a couple a good go at reading them but it had never really interested him that much. What Raiken really wanted to do was venture through the library and find secret rooms and catacombs which no one knew about but the Raikage himself. Raiken had quite the imagination on him like any other young, curious boy his age. As he walked up to the top of the steps he began to slowly push on the large double wooden doors. Crazy ideas and thoughts rushed through his mind like a stick being swept down a rushing stream. As the large doors began to open Raiken wondered what amazing things would be inside. His adventure for the day was just beginning....

Raiken pushed the large wooden doors open with force as they were quite heavy. He wondered why it wasn't open already, it was the middle of the day and he was sure many people would pass through the place, it was just rude to have the doors shut. Raiken wasn't completely wrong either. The library wasn't exactly packed but it still had a large number of people walking around, or reading books at tables. The inside was quite elaborate and decrative. The inside of the building was as old-fashioned as the outside, and this was to be expected. Raiken walked inside slowly his eyes darting from one side of the room to the other. He had never seen so many books and scrolls in his life before, the walls being covered in them in all directions.

Raiken walked up the main enterance up to a counter. There was a small, older looking lady perched in a black chair behind the large counter writing on a long scroll. "Well hello there dear, how may I help you?" she said with a kind voice. Raiken didn't really know what he wanted, he wasn't exactly sure what to look for in the his. He asked her about the place and what kinds of things he could find in here. She replied quickly and proptly, spitting out a thousand words at a time, explaining everything there is to know about books. Raiken's brain could barely handle everything she was saying so he politely ended the conversation and went to explore the area himself.

There were many corridors and rooms which people were quietly sat at reading or writing. Naturally, Raiken came across area's which he and the public were restricted to and he thought this must be the area where the hidden secrets of the village were kept or forbidden jutsu for ninja never to set their eyes on. He turned his head to the left, and then to the right. The corridor on which he stood was empty except his own two feet. He then went to turn the knob on the turn to open it, being very cautious not to set off any alarms or anything. But the door wouldn't budge so he looked around up and over it. there happened to be a couple of seals on the door which raiken had noticed. "Darn, I'm never going to be able to open the door with those things on them." But as eager as he was he tried anyway.

Suddenly a man came out from no where "Hey kid, what do you think your doing." Raiken looked up at him with a guilty look on his face, and without any hesitation he ran for the door. The man quickly followed him nipping at his heels every stride that he took. The man didn't look like a ninja, and Raiken thought that he might work here but he wasn't going to take any chances. He quickly ran in between two woman who hurtled their books up in the air in shock. Raiken turned his head around still running, and had a little chuckle but he didn't have time as the man was still following. Raiken then pushed through another door and finally the main exit was in his sight. He jumped over a chair and lunged himself forward for the door. He quickly pulled it open and ran down the stairs. The man stood at the door with his arms on his legs panting heavily. "If I ever catch you around here again you little brat, you will be sorry!" Raiken poked his head out from around the corner where he hid, his heart fluttering at a million miles an hour. it was only the morning but Raiken could tell the today was going to be an eventful one.


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PostSubject: Re: Saruzaka, Takeshi   Mon May 17, 2010 6:07 am

Lawl, way more on personality and appearance, and specialties are things such as faster than the average joe, so take out that part of your specailty.. Btw, nice RP sample.. Once you fix all the stuff I told you to, then your approved as a normal shinigami.
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PostSubject: Re: Saruzaka, Takeshi   Tue May 18, 2010 12:07 am

done .. fixed .. hey .. any list of shinigami ranks there ?
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PostSubject: Re: Saruzaka, Takeshi   Tue May 18, 2010 6:04 am

Unfortunately, the last one was deleted, so we currently do not have a shinigami list.. So, approved.
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