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PostSubject: Jor'lo Dosene   Mon Jul 19, 2010 2:43 pm

Name: Dosene Jor'lo

Rank: Captain

Age: Actual age: 2,666 Physical age: 25

Appearance: <----- Picture of my character, if it doen't work, tell me.
Jor'lo Dosene is six foot two, has shoulder length black hair, and has red eyes. His hair comes
down and covers his eyes, making him seem mysterious. Each of his arms are Three feet,
one inch long, and they have a diameter of four inches. Most of his height is in his legs,
for each leg is Four feet, five inches long. They each have a diameter of three inches near
the ankles, to a diameter of seven inches on the calves. His chest is a foot and a half wide,
and his torse is eight inches wide, with a six pack on his stomach.

Jor'lo's clothing choice has been called weird among the Captains of the Soul Society. He wears
a black suit jacket, a dark yellow undershirt, and a red tie. He also always wears long black pants,
no matter how hot it is. He also wears a size eleven and a half in shoes. His shoes are black and
blood red, with flat soles on the bottom.

Gender: Male

Personality: Jor'lo has a calm and relaxed attitude, he does not believe in rash actions.
Jor'lo would rather sit and listen in a conversation then actually contribute to it. The only thing that
does make him very rash, and very angry, is when his freinds get hurt. Jor'lo does not have a problem
getting in a fight, but he preffers not to. He would rather talk out his problems, or if that was not
possible, simply destroying his enemy before they had a full blown fight. His commrads say that while
he is calm, he is also fierce when he needs to be.

Jor'lo is a great thinker, his strategys are almost always unbeatable. He looks at a fight the same way
as he would a chess game, always three moves ahead of the opponent. While this does help him often,
it does make him vulnerable to an unpredictable opponent. He doesn't know how to fight someone he can't
predict, he is too used to being able to use a strategy.

Though Jor'lo may not speak much, when he does his words are always profound, always wise. He is a great
speaker, when he needs to be. This earns him much respect in the Soul Sociaty. While his words may be wise,
his actions are not as wise when he can't control his emotions. When his friends, or anyone he cares about,
are threatened he becomes violent, and sometimes even chaotic. He dreads this, because then he usually
can not control his actions, and he will drop all attempts at strategy.


Division: 11th Division

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(This piece is optional)

Hair Color: Black

Likes: Jor'lo likes visiting his zanpakto spirit, deffeating his enemies, and protecting his friends.

Dislikes: Jor'lo dislikes it when his friends are threatened, and when he loses control.

Crushes: Jor'lo likes a girl who isn't just beauty, but brains too. He believes that a girl could be the
most beautiful girl in the world, but without brains they are ugly to him. The girl must have a good personallity
also, someone who can take a joke while also someone who doesn't joke about everything.


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Specialties: Jor'lo is a great barbequer, he always cooks everything he barbeques just right. Or just
how you like it, whichever the situation is.

History: Jor'lo Dosene was born in the seemingly peaceful Karakura town. Jor'lo was an average
child in every way, or so people would think. There was one secret that his parents kept hidden from the world,
he said he saw monsters everywhere. Now I know what you're saying, "Monsters? Children see those all the
time when they're younger, it's no big deal." But you are wrong, so wrong. For you see, what Jor'lo thought was
monsters, and what he told his parents where monsters, were really hollows. Yes, as a human child Jor'lo was
able to see hollows. As the years past he continued to tell his parents whenever he would see one of these "monsters",
and they became increasingly more worried by the year. At the age of twelve and he was still complaining, his parents
put him into therapy. At fifteen? His therapist sugested he be put into a mental hospital.

Jor'lo was in that mental hospital for a full year and he saw no monsters. Finally they were going to let him out, it was
the happiest day of his life! For the first time in a year he would be able to roam free! And then the unthinkable happened,
in his last group therapy session he was looking around, it was twenty minutes from his release and he wanted OUT OF
THERE. Then he saw it, the very first monster he ever saw, the one that seemed to eat what looked like the soul of his
twin sister when she died at the age of three. It was in the corner of the room, just staring at him, with a blood thirsty look
on it's face. Jor'lo couldn't believe his eyes, WOULDN'T believe his eyes,. He would not believe that the monsters were
back! Then it happened, the monster started slowly for word, and Jor'lo's eyes widened in fear. Is he after me? he ate
my sister, now does he want ME?

But alas, no he did not. which was even worse for Jor'lo. The monster came right to the opposite corner of the room, and
when Jor'lo looked there he could not believe it, there was a person there! As jor'lo watched the monster started to
consume the person whole, and the blood curdling screams coming from the person told Jor'lo that it was very painful. Yet
when he looked around the room he saw that no one could see them! finally he could not stand it, "Are you all going to just sit
there on your lazy asses or are you going to HELP this man! He is being eaten alive by a hidious monster!" Jor'lo screamed,
pointing straight at the gorry and discusting seen. "What man? What monster?" Said the doctor watching the group therapy
session. "Jor'lo, you have been so good, all year you haven't seen one monster, why now?" The doctor said with a look of
concern on his face.

Jor'lo watched as the monster consumed the man, and as the doctor called in the men in white and their knock-out needle.
I have to help this man, but i can't do ANYTHING, not against this monster. Then he heard something he had only heard
once before, the day his twin was eaten by this very monster. [i] But you CAN do something Jor'lo, just do what I say.
He jumped when he heard the voice, but he didn't argue. If this voice was able to help him save this man, then by all means
he was going to let it help him. The voice said, Point your finger straight at the monster and say, "Hell fire!"
Slowly, hesitantly, he brought his finger up, but some how he knew he had to say the words without any breaks so he said with an air of
confidence, "Hell fire!" Suddenly a flame shot out of his finger and engulfed the monster, who promptly spit the man out.
The man seemed unharmed, if a bit shaken. But that did not concern Jor'lo right now, what DID concern him was him hearing his sister's
voice yelling out, "Thank you Jor'lo! You have set me freeeeeeeee..........." And then it cut off.

Jor'lo awoke three days later in his room at the mental hospital. No! No I will not stay here for another year! I am through with this place,
I want OUT!! Jor'lo thought, and this time, he got an answer. You do not have to stay here, use your new power to get out. Just say,
"I shall escape through the flames of the abyss." And you will turn into fire and be able to escape through even the smallest opening.
Jor'lo did not hesitate in the slightest. The voice had helped him before, why would it be any different now? "I shall escape through the flames
of the abyss." Jor'lo whispered in as low a voice as he could. Jor'lo then began to slowly become a flame, he then moved over towards the
barred window and floated his way down. As he touched down on the ground outside of the walls of the mental hospital he returned to human
form, and emediatly became exaughsted. But he could not stop there. If someone saw him there passed out they would bring him back to the
hospital, and that he could not have. Jor'lo walked half a mile before he saw an abandonded farm house, not two miles away from his old home.
I shall sleep here tonight and then tomorrow i will be home. He thought to himself.

The next morning Jor'lo felt refreshed and revitalized. He quickly walked the two miles to his home, and then stopped dead in his tracks. His house,
it was not there! It looked burned to the ground! then he heard the voice again, for the last time while he lived. I am sorry Jor'lo, this is all my
fault. I did this, but i did not mean to. Jor'lo.......your family is dead. They're all dead. They were burned alive in this very house. Let me explain, see
the day they dragged you off to the mental hospital, that same monster that you just deffeated four days ago was here. He has been following you
just out of your sight sense your sister was consumed by him. Just after they knocked you out, for a split second the wall in your soul that held me back
was down. So I took the chance, I knew that if anything were to ever happen to you and this monster was still following you it would consume you too.
And I could not allow that. Unfortunatly I could not move your arm so I just shot, your finger looked lined up with him. But I was wrong, terribly
terribly wrong. The fire shot out and missed the monster completly, it burned the whole house to the ground. I am so sorry Jor'lo, can you ever forgive me?
No, Jor'lo could not. Jor'lo locked the voice away and vowed to never let him out as long as he lived.

Nine years past and Jor'lo was living by himself up in the mountains, no monsters bothered him up there. It was his birthday, but he did not see it as that
way. He saw this day as his family had been murdered by the very monster that was inside of him. There was only one person he ever talked to, the
female mountain climber, named Kahia, that sometimes came up this mountain. She liked Jor'lo, he could tell, but he refused to leave this mountain. Kahia
was supposed to climb up here today to spend his worthless birthday with him, but something was wrong. She was always there before noon, yet by the
fancy watch Kahia had given him on his last birthday it was already one o' clock. Jor'lo was getting scared, no matter how much he refused to come off
this mountain with her he still cared for her deeply. He would say he loved her, but he refused himself that emotion because it could unlock the cage
the monster inside him resides in. Thirty minutes passed and he was getting frantic, he started looking over the edge of the flat area he lived on looking
for her. Finally he couldn't stand it, he had to go down there and find her. There was only one problem, he did not know how to climb and when he came
up here he dropped rocks on the path he took to ensure that he could not go back down, what was he to do?

There was only one solution, but he hated it. He had to call upon the one thing he promised himself he would never call upon again, the voice. Slowly he
started to mentally unlock the cage the voice was in, but only enough so that he could hear it. Jor'lo said to it, You! Monster! You who murdered my
family, I vowed to never let you out again, but I am in dire need of your powers. I shall make a deal with you, if you promise me that no matter what you
will not use your powers through me unless I am controlling them, then I shall release you from your cage. Do we have a deal? Jor'lo asked the voice,
sternly but with a hint of fear and anxiaty. You locked me in this cage for nine years..........and i do not blame you for it. I am a monster for
murdering your family, even though it was an accident, and i am sorry for it. I accept your deal, on one condition. You must stay off this mountain, and if
Kahia is still alive, you must make yourself happy and marry her. Agreed? Jor'lo thought about this for what seemed like years to him, but was
really only a few moments. Even with the voices promise to not do anything alone he still did not trust himself, but he really had no choice. He had to get
down there and see what had happened to Kahia. Agreed. Jor'lo finally said. As he thought it he flew the cage door wide open, letting the voice
enter his conciousness once more. He then spoke the words he only spoke once before, "I shall escape through the flames of the abyss!" As his body
turned into flames he quickly floated downwards, the high winds up here were starting to put him out.

When he reached the ground tears came to his eyes. There, lying on the ground, broken and dying was Kahia. Jor'lo turned human and ran full speed to her.
Gentally he lifted her head in his hands and looked her in the eyes. She then said, "Jor-Jor'lo? Y-you came d-down off your m-mou-mountain. W-why?
For me?" Jor'lo kissed her softly and said, "Yes my love, I came for you. I knew not where you were so I came down off the mountain, and not a moment
too soon. Come, if we hurry i can bring you to a hospital and you will live." As he said this he started to lift her gently from the ground. AS he did she
screamed in pain, she could not be moved. "Jor'lo, Jor'lo please! The pain, the pain is too great!" She screamed out. Jor'lo quickly put her back on the
ground and once again held her head up. "What can I do, Kahia? How can I save you?" Jor'lo asked pleadingly. She looked him straight in the eyes and
said with her very last breath, "You.................can....................not..........." As the last word passed by her lips the light left her eyes. But then something
astonishing happened, as Jor'lo held her he watched as what looked like a shadow of her stood up from her body. As it stepped away from the body it
solidified, and then looked at him with sadness. Jor'lo heard her say, "What has happened? I died, i can see Jor'lo holding up my dead body's head right there,
and yet I am alive! Is this the after life? Can Jor'lo see me? Mabye if I......" Her eyes then widened with horror. As Jor'lo looked behind his back he saw a
massive beast, larger than the monster he killed was.

"No, no! You shall not consume her soul foul beast! I shall not allow it!" Jor'lo said as he stood up and stood between the monster and his love's spirt. He pointed
his finger straight at the beast and said, "Hell fire!" Blasting a flame straight towards the beast. As the flame crashed into the beast head-on Jor'lo
growled and called out to the voice, Voice! Help me! I must save her spirit! And as soon as he did the flame got larger, causing the beast to stagger backwords.
But it was not enough. The flame stopped soon after and all that happened was it had burned off an arm, which promptly grew back. The beast then pounced on
him, breaking his rib-cage and piercing both his lungs and his heart with broken ribs. The last thing he saw before slipping into unconciousness was what looked like a
man with a sword popping out of no-where and lunging straight for the beast.

As Jor'lo awoke he looked araound, he was in the exact same place accept the beast and Kahia were gone. And something else that he could not believe, He saw his
body lying lifeless not ten feet away. He had died! The beast had killed him! Jor'lo looked around and saw the man with his sword out looking around, Jor'lo presumed
he was keeping watch. Finally Jor'lo got the courage to sit up and say, "Who are you? What are you doing here? What was that thing? Where is Kahia?" When he
finished the man looked around, he looked worn out, from behind Jor'lo would have said he was an old man judging by the white hair but from the front he saw that the
man looked young. Finally after what seemed like an hour the man spoke, "I am Hakudoshi Rentai, Captain of the 6th division of the Gotei 13, chief of police for the
Soul Society. That monster is what is called a hollow, the feast on souls to become stronger so they can eventually become either arrancar if they are accepted by the
traitor Aizen, or they become what is called a Vasto Lorde, the strongest form of a normal hollow. Your friend, I believe you called her Kahia? she is now at the
Soul Society, or at the least on her way there. Nothing can harm her now. I will be sending you there soon too but first i wanted to ask you something. Before I got here,
while I was a little ways away, I saw you shot flames out of your finger, were you an advanced human?" Jor'lo looked at him quizickly, he had no idea what that was. So
that is what he said to him, "I do not have a clue what that is. All I knw is I have, or rather had, this voice in my head that talked to me and gave me these weird powers.
The man, Hakudoshi, Looked at Jor'lo strangely, then shook his head. He said to Jor'lo, "I am going to send you to the Soul Society now, when you get there you
should see more men with swords but they will have all black clothes on, tell them that I said you are to go to my office. If they do not believe you show them this." He then
gave Jor'lo a necklace, which Jor'lo put on his neck. Then the man was gone.

When Jor'lo told the other men what Hakudoshi said to him they did not believe him, until he showed them the necklace. they then brought him to an office and told him to
wait there. Jor'lo waited for what seemed like a week but for some reason he did not get tired, hungry, or even thirsty. Finally Hakudoshi came in. He sat behind his desk
and looked Jor'lo straight in the eye. He said, "You are special, you were an advanced human. Do you know what that means? it means you were a human with powers,
powers that work on beings like us Shinigami and the hollows. And now you are here, in the Soul Society, and you will make a fine Soul Reaper. Would you like to join
the academy?" The very blunt and unexpected question hit Jor'lo hard, would that mean he would become like Hakudoshi? Jor'lo did not know. but there was one thig he
did know. He said, "Before I answer you, I need to ask you something. You said you sent Kahia here,m correct?" Hakudoshi smiled and said to him, "Well, yes and no.
She is here, just not in the Soul Society. She is in the Rukongi, with all the rest of the non-Soul Reaper Shinigami." Jor'lo looked at Hakudoshi and said, "Then for right
now I must humbly refuse. I must go to this Rukongi and find her, for she is my love, even in death." As he said this he stood up and started to walk out. As he did
Hakudoshi called back to him, "Know that the offer will always be open to you, no matter how long you wait.

For a thousand years Jor'lo wandered the Rukongi looking for Kahia, he would not give up. He knew he would find her, if only because he knew he would not stop looking
until he did. His search had given him a few leads, but they had all come up with nothing. He didn't know what to do anymore, he would continue to look, but where could
he look that he hadn't looked already? He Had went everywhere in the rukongi, except for the bad part of town, where all the Soul Reaper-haters lived. It was his last chance,
so he decided to go. As he walked over there he sensed someone following him, he figured it was nothing, just the jiters for going to the area that hates the very thing has
wanted to become, so he didn't worry about it. As he continued to walk he started to see a figure lurking in the shadows behind him. Now he was on his guard, though he didn't
show it. Jor'lo continued to walk but kept an eye out behind him. When the figure was no more than five feet away Jor'lo ducked behind an ally wall and waited. As the person
came around the corner Jor'lo tackled them, then his eyes widened when he saw who it was! As he ripped off the mask she was wearing he gasped, it was Kahia, she had found HIM.
"K-kahia, I've been looking everywhere for you!" Jor'lo stammered as he got off of her. "I've looked for you for the last thousand years! where have you been?" As he said this
he started to help her up from the ground. She looked at him and said, "I know, i have been following you for the last decade. I didn't aprouch you because.......I was afraid."
She said as she dropped her head in what looked like shame. "I-I just couldn't face you, i just couldn't." Jor'lo gentally brought her head up, and kissed her warmly. "Why?
Why couldn't you face me?" He asked. "What did you do that you couldn't face me?" She tried to look away, but could not. So she looked in his eyes and said, "I-it's all
my fault you died. I was in a hurry to see you and I forgot my safety gear. That's why i fell, that's why......." But she could not say anymore, for Jor'lo was kissing her too
tightly and passionatly. Finally they broke contact and Jor'lo said, "I do not care why you fell, i'm just glad you're safe. if i couldn't find you, if something had happened to you,
i do not know what i would have done." Jor'lo said looking deeply into her eyes.

Seems like a simple enough love story, right? Girl meets boy, girl falls in love, boy won't let himself fall in love, boy finally falls in love and the live happily ever after, right? That's
the story everyone wants? Well i'm sorry to disapoint you, but nothing ever stays this happy. now to continue with the story. So, Jor'lo had finally done it. Had found his love.
As he promised Hakudoshi he returned to the Soul Society at this time and went into the academy. In the academy his most prominent classes were sword-on-sword fighting,
and tactics. Melee actually was his best class, the only instructors he couldn't beat in a sword fight by his graduation was the Captain of squad 11, and the Captain Commander
of cource. In tactics he exceled also, reaching co-top of the class by his graduation. His only problem was kido, he believed that kido was for weaklings who didn't want to get
dirty sword fighting. So he kind of disapointed his instructors there, he only was able to do up to kido #29 by his graduation. One thing his instructors were very excited about
though, he reached shikai very early in his instruction. It happened very weirdly, one day while in the middle of a spar between Jor'lo and the 9th division captain, Jor'lo was
getting his butt handed to him like he always did against this captain, when the voice came back! After all these long years, it was back! At first it was small and insignificant,
like a misquito. But it grew louder, and louder the more Jor'lo ignored it, until finally Jor'lo heard it scream out just as he was knocked to the ground and was about to lose.
Jor'lo! Jor'lo use me! At that Jor'lo jumped, he hadn't heard that voice in over a thousand years! Jor'lo, I was once a voice in your head that gave you powers.
or so you thought. I was NEVER that, I was always a part of you, a part of your soul. I am impressed by your progress so far, so I will allow you to use my powers. My name,
is Rosokaku. Simply say the word inferno to use me. Now fight Jor'lo, fight! Jor'lo hesitated, this voice betrayed him once before when he murdered Jor'lo's family, but Jor'lo
did want more power. And from what he heard was a Zanpakto this voice DID seem to meet the deffinition. So Jor'lo dicided to trust the voice, for now. "Inferno!" Jor'lo yelled,
bringing his has together at the hilt of his sword, he did not know what had urged him to do that, but something did. he assumed it was his Zanpakto. As he took his hands a part
a strange thing happened, his sword began to change! First, the sword split into TWO swords, and the hilts shortened. Then the blade itself changed, on the second sword the
color was oppisite on the whole thing, and they both had lengthened and curved, creating scimitars. As Jor'lo swung them around a few times they felt perfectly balenced, simple
extentions of Jor'lo's arms. The 9th division Captain seemed very happy. He said, "Very good Jor'lo! You have achieved shikai! Let us test out your new abilities." At that the captain
lunged at Jor'lo, and Jor'lo was able to dodge it! Before the Captain was so fast he couldn't even see him, now he was not slow exactly, but Jor'lo could reract to his attacks!
Jor'lo smiled and launched an attack of his own, the captain DID block it, but he staggered back a little. The Jor'lo heard the voice again, In shikai your strength and speed are
doubled, and you have a power which you just might remember. Point your sword at your opponent and say the words Hell fire, do you remember that? Jor'lo did, and he smiled.
He pointed his right sword at the captain, started to walk forword, and yelled out "Hell fire!" releasing a pillar of flame from the end of his sword. It caught the captain off guard, and even
scorched his arm as he tried to escape, but then the captain had seen enough. the captain decided to end the battle. As the captain escaped he ended up on Jor'lo's right side and stabbed
straight out, luyckily Jor'lo was prepared and he was able to deflect it so the stab didn't pierce any internal organs, but he was knocked to the ground. The captain put his sword to Jor'lo's
neck and said "Dead. but you did really good, iI am proud of you. You are ready for graduation."

True to his word the captain set up Jor'lo's graduation soon after. Jor'lo was held in high regard, it was difficult choicing a division for him. Finally the Captain Commander spoke. "Jor'lo,
you have done very well, you have earned all of our respect. we have given you your position based on how you did in the academy. You did very well in all strength and tactics assignments,
while in kido you were lacking. so we have decided to put you as the third seat in the 9th division. We all hope you serve us well." Third seat........Jor'lo had gotten third seat..............and he
was disapointed. He wanted a higher seat, but he guessed he couldn't complain, after all he only had shikai, and almost all captains needed bankai. So Jor'lo was sort of happy. But there
were some people who still hated Jor'lo, and all Soul Reapers. After all the long years Jor'lo was finally able to return to his love, and they rejoyced. But it was at a price, for you see one
of the Shinigami, Dokatsu, hated Soul Reapers more than even hollows. And Dokatsu had followed Jor'lo from the gates that separates the Seireitei and the Rukongi distict. That night,
Dokatsu did the one thing that would upset Jor'lo the most, he kidnapped Kahia. When Jor'lo found the note the next morning he knew exactly who it was from, and he knew Dokatsu's
reiatsu too. He emediatly set off to find him. As he ran towards where the reiatsu signature was he could feel Kahia's signiture there too. Which only made him run all the faster. Finally
he got there and burst through the door, and as soon as he did Dokatsu slit Kahia's throat, right in front of Jor'lo's eyes. Jor'lo screamed a primative scream of diffiance as Kahia fell to
the ground, dead before Jor'lo's eyes for the second time.Jor'lo jumped into the air and launched himself straight at Dokatsu, all the while Dokatsu is laughing his head off. Jor'lo starts to
carve up Dokatsu like a piece of meat, cutting off easch limb and then splitting his torse into four parts and then cutting off the head. Jor'lo believes he is still alive because he can still hear
the laughter, but it is only a echo in his head.

That day something died inside of Jor'lo. That day was the day that Jor'lo made a solum vow. That he would work as hard as he could to get stronger so that he can stop things like that
from happening. He would become stronger so he could protect people like Kahia, so that he would never have to watch someone he cared for die like that again, so that he would never
have to lose control like that ever again. So he went to work for the Soul Society, training, becoming stronger, and never forgetting his vow.

One day it happened, he achieved bankai. He was on a mission to the human world on a protecting mission and he was up against two menos. He killed one of them finally but was too
weak to beat the second one. Then Rosokaku appeared in front of him and said, "Are you just going to sit there and allow this hollow to kill you and all these humans? What about
your vow? I will NOT allow you to die here. I will give you something, my bankai. use it well. just say, "Bankai Rosokaku" and i will go into my bankai. use it well." And at that he left.
Jor'lo smiled at the thought of having bankai. "Ignite Rosokaku." He said in a whisper. When he spoke those words his blades turned into pure fire! He chuckled when he realized
he could extend the flaming blades to six feet long now and that it didn't over balence him in the slightest. He smiled at the menos and launched himself towards it. within seconds it was
deffeated. When he returned to the Soul Society he was granted the position of 11th division captain now that he had bankai. It truely was the happiest he had been sense Dokatsu took
his love away from him.


Sample Chapter: Jor'lo Dosene leaped backwords and did a mid-air backflip to avoid Toshiro's ice spear. As he did
he brought his hands together his hilt and whispered "Inferno". He then brought his hands apart releasing his shikai. As his
shikai was activated his blade split in two, then lengthened by half a foot to end up at four feet long. The blades then curve
at the end until Jor'lo is holding two scimitars. Jor'lo was getting tired of running away from this boy, he was having fun in this
fight, but he wanted to get it over with. The fight was starting to get irritatingly hard in his sealed state.

"Lets dance!" He yelled at Toshiro, he then shunpo'd in front of him. Jor'lo then started to cut and slash at Toshiro, so quickly
that Jor'lo couldn't even see if they hit. After a while Jor'lo started to sweat like crazy from all the hectic hacking and slashing
with his twin scimitars. Finally after his two hundred anf thirty-fourth Jor'lo jumped backwords and watched
the dust clear to see if he did any damage.

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PostSubject: Re: Jor'lo Dosene   Mon Jul 19, 2010 2:56 pm

Hmm, this looks okay to me. You are now a normal Reaper and need to talk to the CC about being a captain.


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PostSubject: Re: Jor'lo Dosene   Mon Jul 19, 2010 3:15 pm

Double STAMPED.
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